"...what in hell have you been worrying about? This is fucking sensational. There are no plot danglies, there are no holes, the plot counterpoints are basically seamless, and it's tighter than a nun's arse in a barfight."
Of course, I see things that need to be worked on, and Madame Editrix will have her own ideas, but yay team me! Now I'm going to finish up my own notes, and then go have a drink. Or two.